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Monday 31 July 2017

100 WC


Once

This Week I am reading once which is about a Jewish boy who goes on a quest to find his mum and dad after seeing books were being burnt. the success criteria was to write 100 words about one character I chose the main guy Felix I hope you enjoy my 100 word challenge

Once  4 men in suits came to the orphanage up the rocky mountains i thought it was mum and dad but It wasn't. Soon After that I saw  huge flares of flames go up outside the orphanage  what I saw I couldn't get it out of my head they were burning mother minkais books.  I get my bag and pack it and after breakfast and when the book burners left Soon after I left the orphanage to find Mum and Dad. As I slided down the to Father Ludwicks house I was starving and stole the soft bread and water.
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  1. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 09:33

    Hey Flynn.
    I really enjoyed your story it makes me wounder what happens next.
    You have included fulls stops capital letters and all the other basic things.

    From Chyna
    Oamaru Intermediate School.

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