Today we had to write a memoir poem about are book that we doing for our novel study mine is Once the success criteria was to write about your characters scene and the situation your character was in i hope you like what i wrote and give feedback on anything that I need to improve on.
Once
The orphanage was eventful enough
It had lots of yucky food cold water and kids all over the place
Jewish books burning
Four ugly Nazis plotting their attack
Innocent Jewish people screaming
Horrific Enemies looming
We did nothing other friends do,
Aggressive Croats invading and horrific boys capturing
I'm Crying to stay alive, doing everything I can to
Find Mum and Dad
Doing everything Important ..
ReplyDeleteHi Flynn
You created a memoir poem reflecting the situation and scene in the movel 'once'. Like the use of your strong Adjective,Noun and Verbs
Please add more to your description to explain the purpose of your post and what you had to do specifically.
Hi Flynn
ReplyDeletecool memoir poem I like how you put yourself in the characters shoes.
Cormac
Yr 6
Drummond Primary school
Hello Flynn
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School
I liked your poem it was very detailed
Kai Pi
From Maddison