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Thursday 31 August 2017

Can you guess


This week we had to write a story on someone we knew but not anyone who lives with us the succes critera was to write about there face, skin, hair, action and there talking I hope you enjoy my story and try guess who it is

She has wrinkled, dried up skin with a slight tan and does a range of voluntary work at starship ward B. The wrinkles don't show she's 80 at all. Her wrinkled face shows she's aging every day of her life.
Her thick black and grey hair is really thick. Although her hair is mostly black there are some traces of white throughout her hair. As she walks her hair shines in the sunlight through the hospital windows at starship. her

Her red lips highlight her face and sit neatly under her blue eyes and lovely smile.  Her small glasses  glimmer in sunshine.  Her white shiny teeth show she brushes. Her scruffy eyebrows darken her face. Her ears pick up any sound  

Her high pitched voice is noticed anywhere in the starship hospital. She engages you to into what  she's saying or doing.Her funny sense of humour is noticed threw out starship ward B. her interesting talks brighten up darkest of dull days at starship hospital.


Her way of moving is unique slow but unique because of her wadle she does sometimes to get from A to B. Her laugh makes you really happy in dull days . Her amazing way to talk to heart families like us is so special when you go there tough times like this it's good to know you  have someone like her by your side to get you thru the horrible days.

5 comments:

  1. Hi flynn

    Great story. Is it nana maree

    Carey

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  3. Hi Flynn

    Good job when is the next charper came

    Blake

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  4. Hi Flynn
    Great job on your story. It is very descriptive and I think it might be your Nana. Great job.

    Khali

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  5. Hi Flynn
    excellent job I also think it is your Nan. also your going down in badminton.
    Cormac

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