Yesterday we watched the Boy In The Stripped Pyjamas. the success criteria was We had to choose a part in the movie to write a memoir poem about. I chose to write about the backyard scene because in my perspective the back yard scene was the best because he made the really fast swing. I hope you enjoy my poem
The swing was big enough
It was powerful strong and had surrounds of stones
Speedy swing was swinging
Massive fence guarding
Noisy trucks arriving with horrendous numbers of innocent Jews
Bloody leg aching really badly
Running man worrying for Bruno
Swinging so fast like lightning
For my joy, and happiness
Hi Flynn
ReplyDeleteYour Poem is very interesting. I like how you made it Rhyme. How you described it is very interesting.
Khali
Yr 6
Drummond Primary School
Hi Flynn, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School. Your blog post is really cool. I like that you added lots of descriptive words.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School
I really liked your poem
it was really cool did you watch the movie?
Ka Pi from Maddison
Hi Flynn
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School
I really liked your poem because I have watched some of the move and I loved how you used not much words (just two or three ) to describe the movie. Did you just watch the movie or did your class watch it etc
it was really cool two read that blog post, and I could understand it really well, it wasn't too long so I didn't stop reading it.
What is you favorite movie? Mine is twilight
Maybe next time you can add some pictures of it
KAI PI
From Maddison