I am learning to write a piece of prose- a sketch with detailed words, about a particular place, that is very important to me
I know I have achieved this when I can describe this sketch of the place,in specific detail. To do this I need to:
- Use specific nouns
- Activate the nouns with strong verbs
It's the little things in life ...
A cricket pitch
Morres Reserve Cricket
Many wickets collapsing in the top order as a hot Summer's day drifts on.
Bales tumbling while wickets falling in the fired up game
Batters decimating the run rate and total score they created a good total
Fielders absolutely amaze the crowd with their outstanding boundary savers and efforts.
Bowlers eliminating everything in their path to get the much needed win.
Creased lines smudging as the batters and bowlers get more anticipated for the win.
Supporters supporting on the sideline their fellow teams and great efforts by others.
Vehicle owners moving their cars away after hearing the upcoming bet on who can hit the furtherest..
My chosen place - the cricket pitch
Hey there Flynn.
ReplyDeleteThis is very cool!
Did you enjoy writing it?
Thanks Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School.
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ReplyDeleteHi Flynn,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great blog post because you did a great piece of writing.
I could picture every sentence you wrote.
Maybe next time you should why you chose cricket pitch.
Why is a is cricket pitch t very important to you ?
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.