As I was walking down the street I was watching 3 now, as I saw breaking news topic a dramatic change to the weather was made, it was fatal, Mike Puru the weather man died in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over and killed him. His life on being on reality shows like the bachelor and 3 news, was over. Telling girls to leave the bachelor mansion was over; 19 I don't know to 2017. One News quote was "Love a little, laugh a lot, be Mike's partner, drop him".
Wednesday, 28 June 2017
100 WC:
This week's prompt was about a dramatic weather change. I was focusing on improving punctuation - we are learning how to use semi-colons. I was also trying to use better words. What do you think?
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ReplyDeleteHi Flynn,
I like your sentences Mike Puru the weather man died in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over and killed him. Mike Puru the weather man died in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over and killed him. It is cool
Blake
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