Once Memoir Poem

Today we had to write a memoir poem about are book that we doing for our novel study mine is Once the success criteria was to write about your characters scene and the situation your character was in i hope you like what i wrote and give feedback on anything that I need to improve on.

Once

The orphanage was eventful enough

It had lots of yucky food cold water and kids all over the place  

Jewish books burning

Four ugly Nazis plotting their attack

Innocent Jewish people screaming

Horrific Enemies looming

We did nothing other friends do,

Aggressive Croats invading and horrific boys capturing

I'm Crying  to stay alive, doing everything I can to

Find  Mum and Dad

Doing everything Important ..

100 WC

Once

This Week I am reading once which is about a Jewish boy who goes on a quest to find his mum and dad after seeing books were being burnt. the success criteria was to write 100 words about one character I chose the main guy Felix I hope you enjoy my 100 word challenge

Once  4 men in suits came to the orphanage up the rocky mountains i thought it was mum and dad but It wasn't. Soon After that I saw  huge flares of flames go up outside the orphanage  what I saw I couldn't get it out of my head they were burning mother minkais books.  I get my bag and pack it and after breakfast and when the book burners left Soon after I left the orphanage to find Mum and Dad. As I slided down the to Father Ludwicks house I was starving and stole the soft bread and water.

Holidays

on the first day of Term 3 we had to write about our great holiday or our horrible one. also using connectives like such as, we looked at ranges of different connectives like although.a connective is a word that joins 2 different simple sentences for example never the lees. I spent time improving my writing to a high standard out of 5 sentences. By using connectives it made my writing way better and I was wondering if you guys use connectives?

In the term 2 holidays I did a range of stuff. Some stuff I did was, I went to the movies and watched cars 3 as well as having popcorn and sprite. I also played NBA 2k17, On Saturday I also  had to play soccer at Invercargill, and we got beaten 4-1. I  had a great time despite the wet weather of  te anau  my cousins and my Brother and I had a fabulous time,  Until we had to leave the Doc center. Also we went to the gymnastic club in Invercargill for heart kids however we had  lots of food.

First aid movie

After our session with Felicia from St John's in Schools we realised we had learnt a lot. We thought...how can we share what we have learnt? So we brainstormed lots of ideas...from making movies to presentations to art projects. Eventually we split into groups and decided what we want to create.

My group was Angelo and Carlyn and we decided to create a movie to share our learning.

Kobe Bryant Showboat

This term we have been doing are novel study and mine was Kobe Bryant showboat hope you like it.

THE HACKERS

This week for the 100 wc it was to write about what do I need now it was really fun to write about and I hope you like it.

THE HACKERS.

As I was walking down the road  I thought to myself now what do I need, wait  I'm rich, and have everything I won't, yay.

As I walked home, and hopped onto my new hp computer something was wrong ; I was hacked, it said all your credit has been taken a.k.a my money, 5 Billion dollars down the drain not literally but to some hackers. I say to myself now what do I need. ugh my money back it's been taken every single cent wait  there's 2$, as I hit my 2 dollars it goes down the drain no kidding.